Writing Feedback
You just read a new chapter of a story (or the story as a whole) and you want to let the author know what you think of it. What do you say?
Evidently a lot of people have that problem. You don't want to leave a rather redundant "Good story. Update soon," because it seems that's what everyone does. But what else can you say?
Here's something that might help. Think back to the story or chapter you read. Were there scenes in it that really stood out for you? Even if there's only one, that's a good start.
Now, what stood out about it? Was the dialogue very well written? Did you like the way the characters interacted? Did the author come up with an unexpected twist? Did you become emotionally involved (it made you laugh, cry, angry, et cetera)? These are some of the many things you can comment on.
If there was something that didn't make sense or that you didn't like, you can mention that, too. But when you do, please mention why you felt that way. A simple 'it sucks' doesn't tell the author anything, and they cannot improve their writing without knowing why you think so. Then again, the author may have a very good reason for what they did, that will become clear later. It doesn't hurt to ask.
What if nothing really stood out, but it kept your interest? Say so. Asking questions is perfectly acceptable, as well.
If it was boring, you might let the author know that it had trouble holding your interest. Do TRY to be diplomatic. They took time out of their lives to try to entertain you. There will usually be a chapter or two in each story that isn't all that interesting in itself, but which sets up situations for later scenes.
Do you have issues with bad grammar, spelling, or the author using the wrong word/s to mean something else entirely? Again, try to be diplomatic, and give corrections for at least a couple of instances. Criticism is fine, if it's constructive criticism. Hopefully you want to help the author become better, not tear them down. If there are just a few errors, they could just be typographical errors. If there are a lot of errors, suggest a place where the author can find a good proof-reader/editor/beta.
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